VSL Templates

VERSION #1: Secrets

SECTION #1 ATTENTION: 

[SCROLL STOPPER]

• ARE you looking for a [SUPERSEVENX1-3] way to [BENEFIT×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH](, and are you [JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATIONS×1-3])?
• DO you want [PROMISE×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH](, so you can stop [PROBLEM/JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATION], and [PROMISE×1-3])?
• HAVE you been wondering [SUPERAVATARS] really [PROMISE×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH]( while [You, other (AVATARS)] [STRUGGLE] / even when [ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE])?

SECTION #2 INTEREST:

*Start retargetting here with Stage #2 Hook

This [MEDIA] [Reveals, Exposes, Discovers] the [Surprising, Jaw-Dropping, Mind-Boggling] truth about [PROMISE/ALTERNATIVE] and how/why (some) [AVATAR(S)/UNDERDOG] [-PROBLEM]( and [+PROMISE])(, without [CATCH]) even if/when [DOUBT or ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE].

OPTIONAL: [ACTION] and you'll [Discover, See, Realize, Know, Learn, Understand] why [LEFT BRAIN PROOF OF CLAIMS], and [RIGHT BRAIN PROOF], and how [AVATARS] REALLY [-PROBLEM](, and [+PROMISE]).

Here's what you'll discover in [MEDIA]:

• [Bullet about single SECRET or SECRET #1].
• [Bullet about single SECRET or SECRET #2].
• [Bullet about single SECRET or SECRET #3].
• [Bullet teasing SOLUTION as way to leverage SECRET(S) and achieve the PROMISE].

This [MEDIA] is for [AVATARS] who( are tired of [PROBLEM-SYMPTOMS×1-3]) looking for a [SUPERSEVEN×1-3] way to [+PROMISE], without [CATCH](, and without worrying whether [DOUBT] will [stop them]).

SECTION #3 ACTION:

If [recap of opening section], and [ready for or want to end the problem and/or achieve the promise], [affirm why they should take action].

[ACTION] to [OUTCOME].

(PS: POWER PS revealing PREMIUM/BONUS for taking above action.)

Version #2: Mistakes

SECTION #1 ATTENTION: 
[SCROLL STOPPER]

• ARE you looking for a [SUPERSEVENX1-3] way to [-PROBLEM] without [PROMISE-CATCH](, and are you [JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATIONS×1-3])?
• DO you want to [-PROBLEM×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH](, so you can stop [PROBLEM/JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATION], and [PROMISE×1-3])?
• HAVE you been wondering [SUPERAVATARS] really [PROMISE×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH]( while [You, other (AVATARS)] [STRUGGLE] / even when [ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE])?

SECTION #2 INTEREST:

*Start retargetting here with Stage #2 Hook

This [MEDIA] [Reveals, Exposes, Discovers] the [Surprising, Jaw-Dropping, Mind-Boggling] truth about [PROBLEM/ALTERNATIVE] and how/why (some) [AVATAR(S)/UNDERDOG] [-PROBLEM]( and [+PROMISE])(, without [CATCH]) even if/when [DOUBT or ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE].

OPTIONAL: [ACTION] and you'll [Discover, See, Realize, Know, Learn, Understand] why [LEFT BRAIN PROOF OF CLAIMS], and [RIGHT BRAIN PROOF], and how [AVATARS] REALLY [-PROBLEM](, and [+PROMISE]).

Here's what you'll discover in [MEDIA]:

• [Bullet about single MISTAKE or MISTAKE #1].
• [Bullet about single MISTAKE or MISTAKE #2].
• [Bullet about single MISTAKE or MISTAKE #3].
• [Bullet teasing SOLUTION as counter to MISTAKE(S) and the only way to cure the problem].

This [MEDIA] is for [AVATARS] who( are tired of [PROBLEM-SYMPTOMS×1-3]) looking for a [SUPERSEVEN×1-3] way to [+PROMISE], without [CATCH](, and without worrying whether [DOUBT] will [stop them]).

SECTION #3 ACTION:

If [recap of opening section], and [ready for or want to end the problem and/or achieve the promise], [affirm why they should take action].

[ACTION] to [OUTCOME].

(PS: POWER PS revealing PREMIUM/BONUS for taking above action.)

VERSION #3: Alternatives

SECTION #1 ATTENTION: 

[SCROLL STOPPER]

• ARE you (tired of) [PROBLEM-SYMPTOM×1-3] and are you ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT])?
• DO you want [PROMISE×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT]) and ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE]?
• HAVE you decided that [PROMISE×1-3] and are you ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT])?

SECTION #2 INTEREST:

*Start retargetting here with Stage #2 Hook

This [MEDIA] [Reveals, Exposes, Discovers] the [Surprising, Jaw-Dropping, Mind-Boggling] truth about [PROMISE/ALTERNATIVE] and how/why (some) [AVATAR(S)/UNDERDOG] [-PROBLEM]( and [+PROMISE])(, without [CATCH]) even if/when [DOUBT or ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE].

OPTIONAL: [ACTION] and you'll [Discover, See, Realize, Know, Learn, Understand] why [LEFT BRAIN PROOF OF CLAIMS], and [RIGHT BRAIN PROOF], and how [AVATARS] REALLY [-PROBLEM](, and [+PROMISE]).

Here's what you'll discover in [MEDIA]:

• [Bullet about single ALTERNATIVE OR ALTERNATIVE #1].
• [Bullet about single ALTERNATIVE OR ALTERNATIVE #2].
• [Bullet about single ALTERNATIVE OR ALTERNATIVE #3].
• [Bullet teasing SOLUTION as counter to ALTERNATIVE(S) and the only way to achieve the PROMISE].

This [MEDIA] is for [AVATARS] who( are tired of [PROBLEM-SYMPTOMS×1-3]) looking for a [SUPERSEVEN×1-3] way to [+PROMISE], without [CATCH](, and without worrying whether [DOUBT] will [stop them]).

SECTION #3 ACTION:

If [recap of opening section], and [ready for or want to end the problem and/or achieve the promise], [affirm why they should take action].

[ACTION] to [OUTCOME].

(PS: POWER PS revealing PREMIUM/BONUS for taking above action.)

[Open with a flashback to a crisis using hypnotic copywriting techniques]. [Transition out with a "little did I/hero know" statement about how the crisis led to the discovery of a secret/solution]. [Tease with a description of the secret/solution and how it will be revealed soon]. My name is [INTRODUCTION].

If you're [watching, listening, reading] this [MEDIA], you and I are probably a lot alike. [Make 3-5 damaging admissions to humanize yourself]. Yet, despite all this, [reference to personal successes or successes in using your product or solution to help others].

[Quick reference to story and tease/foreshadow of what came next].

You're here because (you're tired of [symptoms, frustrations, or jealousy] and) you want [BENEFITS] (without [CATCH], but [DOUBT/FRUSTRATIONS]). [Use an “if [DESIRE], then here’s why___” anchor ending in one of the statements below]…

1. …you need to [read, watch, listen to] this (entire) [MEDIA] all the way to the end…
2. …[finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] (to the end) [is, will be] the best decision you’ve ever made…
3. …[finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will [reference to a categorical change in their life]…

EXAMPLE #1 (Physical Crisis):

Ethan lay alone in a pool of his own blood. Sirens wailed closer as he gazed at flashing red and blue lights above. He could taste the iron in his blood as it filled his mouth.

“So, this is how I’m going to die?” He thought.

Suddenly, Ethan pictured his family. The cheerful faces of his two young children, and his sweet wife, Melanie. They’d be running to greet him at the door by now.

“If I never see them again, it’ll be because of those punks,” he thought, recalling the fierce eyes and jeering grins of his attackers.

Little did Ethan know that his brush with death would lead him to discover a life-changing secret that would have put his attackers in the hospital that night instead of him. A swift system of quick self-defense moves so simple, powerful, and easy, they could make you lethally dangerous to almost any attacker, and I’ll prove it to you over the next 2 minutes.

My name is Dan Powers.

If you’re listening to this message, I'm betting you and I are a lot alike. I've never been remarkably athletic. I'm not naturally fast, strong, or coordinated, and I don't even like to fight. Yet, despite all this, I've discovered and mastered a simple system of quick, highly-effective self-defense moves that I've used to train dozens of people to protect themselves against attackers bigger and stronger than them.

Ethan, the man in the story you just heard, was one of my first students, and your jaw will drop when you hear what happened just after his attack, and what he's doing now.

You’re here because you've probably been hurt in a fight and you want to make your next attacker wish they'd never seen your face. If this sounds right, here's why watching this entire video will be the most life-changing decision you've ever made...

EXAMPLE #2 (Financial Crisis):

My hands were shaking. My face flushed with hot blood as I ripped open my bank statement and stared at the lonely red print…

“Balance -.37 cents”

Rent was 7 days late. I’d given blood twice that week just to buy gas. My refrigerator was empty except for two apples, a bottle of water, and three fish oil capsules. Six months ago, I’d left a six-figure job to start my own business.

Now I had to face the giggling criticisms of everyone who had called me crazy for leaving a steady paycheck to pursue my dream.

But my crushing defeat had a silver lining. It inspired me to seek out and discover a selling strategy so simple, and so powerful, it's swept me on toward roaring success since then. And in the next two minutes, I’ll show you how this strategy will explode your personal income, even if you don’t yet have a business or know what kind of business to start.

My name is Mark Carlton.

If you’ve found this video, it's probably because you and I are a lot alike. I came from a pretty poor family. I’m not naturally smart, charismatic, or creative, and I didn't even finish high school. Yet, despite all this, I’ve escaped the nightmarish cycle of "live work, and die" to become a world-famous business coach who has helped dozens of ordinary people become multimillionaires.

The story you just heard happened to me in 2009, and you'll be shocked to hear what came next, and how I've helped several people quickly build six and seven-figure businesses since then.

You’re here because you’ve built a profitable business with a good client base, and you've even had a few five-figure months. Still, you can't seem to break the $100k a year mark and you're tired of seeing people dumber than you make more money than you. If that's the reason you're watching this video today, here's why watching it to the end will be the most important decision you've ever made...

EXAMPLE #3 (Social Crisis):

I would have crawled naked over broken glass to get off stage that night. My heart pounded and my legs shook like jackhammers as I scanned the crowd for just one friendly face. Muffled jeers rippled through the audience as I struggled to clear the lump in my throat.

For weeks, I’d huddled over that speech trying to perfect every word, every pause, every voice inflection. But as my big date approached, I couldn’t shake the needling voice of internal self-doubt. By the time I stood in front of the crowd, this voice had drowned out every other thought, and I was reduced to a stuttering, self-conscious ball of cold sweat.

Little did I know that this embarrassing moment would lead me to discover a life-changing secret. A timeless mind-calming technique that will quickly, and permanently turn you into a poised, persuasive presenter even if you’re socially awkward and terrified at the thought of speaking in public.

My name is Carl Evans.

If you've found this video, you and I are probably a lot alike. I was never popular in school. I’m not naturally charismatic, or entertaining, and I'm still pretty awkward in social situations. Yet, despite all this, I’ve become a successful speaker for one of the top marketing authorities in the world, and I routinely get standing ovations and sell hundreds of thousands of dollars worth of products every time I speak.

The story you just heard happened to me just six months before this video, and you’ll be shocked to hear what happened the next time I got on stage, and each time since then.

You’re here because you have a life-changing story to share, but can’t seem to shake the toe-curling fear that seizes you just seconds before you step in front of a crowd. If this is right, here’s why watching this video to the end will be the most important decision you’ve ever made…

EXAMPLE #4 (Existential Crisis):

The news hit me like a steel-toed kick in the gut. For 41 years, coaching football had been the center around which everything in my life revolved. Now, I'd lost my four decade career at the high-school where my father, grandfather, my three boys and I had graduated.

I remember walking out of the gym, past a glass-encased wall of trophies, and pictures of me with my students and players. Every one of them was a memory from a life that felt suddenly far away.

I wasn't Coach Johnson anymore. In fact, I wasn't sure who I was now, or what I'd do next. Little did I know that this sudden change would lead me to the deepest and most fulfilling career change of my life.

It started when I walked into a dusty old bookstore, pulled a 100 year old book off the shelf, and discovered an astonishing secret that every man spends his life searching for. Once you've discovered this simple secret for yourself, you'll understand why it's so important for you to watch this webinar to the end.

My name is Ron Johnson.

If you've come this far, you and I are probably a lot alike. I've always thought of myself as a practical and responsible man. I’m not much of a risk taker. Until five years ago, I'd never even left the continental United States or made more than $60k a year.

Today, I travel all over the world making $100k to $200k a month helping men like you to discover their life purpose and turn it into a career that rewards them with a life of deep meaning, and adventure. I often get letters from men who have read my books, and left unfulfilling careers to create six and seven figure businesses and lives of significance.

You’re here because you've always felt like no matter how successful you are, there's always been a piece missing from your life. Despite all your success, you still feel like the best part of you is hiding up your sleeve. If you're ready to discover what this feeling really means, and what you can do about it, here’s why watching this entire webinar will be the most important decision you've ever made…

• ARE you looking for a [SUPERSEVENX1-3] way to [BENEFIT×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH](, and are you [JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATIONS×1-3])?
• DO you want [PROMISE×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH](, so you can stop [PROBLEM/JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATION], and [PROMISE×1-3])?
• HAVE you been wondering [SUPERAVATARS] really [PROMISE×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH]( while [You, other (AVATARS)] [STRUGGLE] / even when [ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE])?

If you answered YES to any of these questions(, here’s why)…

1. …this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] secrets that [impact of secret or anticipation of listener’s response to it]…
2. [finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] secrets that [impact of secret or anticipation of listener’s response to it]…
3. …[finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will [reference to how they’ll save time, energy, money, and hassle by what they’re about to learn]…

(Hi, My name is [NAME]. )

In/By [MEDIA/TIME], I’m going to show you (the ___ truth about) how [SUPERAVATARS] (REALLY) [PROMISEx1-3]( without [CATCH])(, even if/when [DOUBTx1-3],), and [statement confirming how the same will happen for them once they know and/or apply the SECRET(S) themselves].

These/ This SECRET(S) is/are so [SUPERSEVENX1-3] ]that not only [PROMISEx1-3], but [PROMISEx1-3](without [CATCH]) in/by [TIME/DEADLINE] and [statement confirming that they’ll understand AND believe in the above promise the moment they hear these SECRETS themselves].

NOTE: You can use the “Are,” “Have,” and “Do” questions in any order, and use the final one 1-3 times (see example below). 

EXAMPLE:

Are you looking for a quick, healthy, painless, and practical way to drop fat and firm up your midsection, and are you frustrated with conflicting diet and workout advice from people who all claim to have the science on their side?

Have you been wondering how some men still look lean, strong, vibrant, and healthy evem into their 50s, 60s, and 70s?

Do you want to feel healthy, energized, focused, and to look great without committing the next 12 months to a strict diet program, and without spending part time job hours at the gym?

If you answered YES to any of these questions, here’s why watching this video to the end will save you tens of thousands of dollars, and spare you from wrecking your metabolism by losing and gaining the same thirty to fifty pounds over and over again…

My name is Carl Benson.

In the next few minutes, I’m going to expose the simple, common sense truth about how athletes, actors, and ordinary people alike REALLY get and stay lean, strong, vibrant, and healthy even into their 50s, 60s, and 70s, and how you can easily do the same thing without ever stepping foot in a gym, tracking micros, or making meal prep your part time job.

This secrets are so simple, so fast-acting, and powerful you could look in the mirror next week and see tighter, firmer, younger looking face, a leaner midsection, and even start to see the rippling definition in your chest and arms and the second you hear what this secret is, you know why.

• ARE you looking for a [SUPERSEVENX1-3] way to [BENEFIT×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH](, and are you [JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATIONS×1-3])?
• DO you want [PROMISE×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH](, so you can stop [PROBLEM/JEALOUSY/FRUSTRATION], and [PROMISE×1-3])?
• HAVE you been wondering [SUPERAVATARS] really [PROMISE×1-3] without [PROMISE-CATCH]( while [You, other (AVATARS)] [STRUGGLE] / even when [ASSUMED-ADVANTAGE])?

If you answered YES to any of these questions(, here’s why)…

1. …this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] mistakes that [impact of mistake(s) or anticipation of listener’s response to realizing they’re making it/them]…
2. [finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] mistakes that [impact of mistake or anticipation of listener’s response to finding out that they’re making it/them]…
3. …[finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will [reference to how they’ll save time, energy, money, and hassle by what they’re about to learn]…

(Hi, My name is [NAME]. )

In/By [MEDIA/TIME], I’m going to show you (the ___ truth about) how [AVATARS] (REALLY) [PROMISEx1-3]( without [CATCH])(, even if/when [DOUBTx1-3],), and [statement confirming how the same will happen for them once they fix and/or replace the MISTAKE(S)].

These/ This MISTAKE(S) is/are so costly, yet so simple to fix that [PROMISEx1-3](without [CATCH]) in/by [TIME/DEADLINE] and [statement confirming that they’ll understand AND believe in the above promise the moment they hear these MISTAKES themselves].

NOTE: You can use the “Are,” “Have,” and “Do” questions in any order, and use the final one 1-3 times (see example below). 

EXAMPLE:

Are you looking for a quick, healthy, painless, and practical way to drop fat and firm up your midsection, and are you frustrated with conflicting diet and workout advice from people who all claim to have the science on their side?

Have you been wondering how some men still look lean, strong, vibrant, and healthy evem into their 50s, 60s, and 70s?

Do you want to feel healthy, energized, focused, and to look great without committing the next 12 months to a strict diet program, and without spending part time job hours at the gym?

If you answered YES to any of these questions, here’s why watching this video to the end will save you tens of thousands of dollars, and spare you from wrecking your metabolism by losing and gaining the same thirty to fifty pounds over and over again by exposing three common fitness mistakes and how they’re secretly sabotaging your health…

My name is Carl Benson.

In the next few minutes, I’m going to expose the truth about how athletes, actors, and ordinary people alike REALLY get and stay lean, strong, vibrant, and healthy even into their 50s, 60s, and 70s, and how by correcting these simple mistakes, you can easily do the same thing without ever stepping foot in a gym, tracking micros, or making meal prep your part time job.

These mistakes are so costly, yet so quick and simple to correct, you could look in the mirror next week and see tighter, firmer, younger looking face, a leaner midsection, and even start to see the rippling definition in your chest and arms and you’ll understand why the second you hear these mistakes and how to correct them.

• ARE you (tired of) [PROBLEM-SYMPTOM×1-3] and are you ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT])?
• DO you want [PROMISE×1-3] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT]) and ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE]?
• HAVE you decided that [PROMISE×1-3] and are you ([hoping, wondering]) [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW/PROMISE] / [PROMISE] (without [PROMISE-CATCH], but [PROMISE-DOUBT])?

If you answered YES to any of these questions, here’s why…

1. …this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] secrets that [impact of secret or anticipation of listener’s response to it]…
2. [finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will save you [time, energy, stress, etc.] by revealing [#] [ADJECTIVE] secrets that [impact of secret or anticipation of listener’s response to it]…
3. …[finding, attending, reading, watching, listening to] this [MEDIA] will [reference to how they’ll save time, energy, money, and hassle by what they’re about to learn]…

(Hi, My name is [NAME]. )

In/By [MEDIA/TIME], I’m going to show you how ([ALTERNATIVEx1-3])(, even if [ASSUMED ADVANTAGEx1-3],) you could be ([ALTERNATIVE*x1-3])(, even if [ASSUMED ADVANTAGE]).

(In fact, [optional reference to how their attempts to use a specific alternative solution to relieve the symptom is making (or could make) things worse]. )

[Luckily, Thankfully, The good news is], [I’m also going to share with you, you’re about to discover] a [SUPERSEVENX1-3] (“[NICKNAME]”) ([NICHE]) [Shortcut, Trick, Hack, Secret, Habit, Loophole] that not only [PROMISEx1-3], but [PROMISEx1-3], without [CATCH], [even if, and it works no matter how] [DOUBT].

NOTE: You can use the “Are,” “Have,” and “Do” questions in any order, and use the final one 1-3 times (see example below). 

EXAMPLE:

Are you tired of feeling bad about how you look in pictures, or how your clothes fit, and are you looking for a quick, healthy, painless, and practical health routine that will help you drop fat and firm up your midsection?

Have you decided that it’s time to feel good about seeing yourself in a family picture, or looking at yourself in the mirror again?

Do you want to feel healthy, energized, focused, and to look great without committing the next 12 months to a strict diet program, and without spending part time job hours at the gym?

If you answered YES to any of these questions, here’s why watching this video to the end will save you tens of thousands of dollars, and spare you from wrecking your metabolism by losing and gaining the same thirty to fifty pounds over and over again…

My name is Carl Benson.

In the next few minutes, I’m going to show you three popular diets that can permanently damage your metabolism, weaken your immune system, and dramatically shorten your life-expectancy, even if you consider yourself reasonably healthy, work out regularly, and rarely eat junk food.

In fact, I’m going to show you how one very popular diet that can slowly wear down your vital organs, and weaken your immune system, and gnaw away at the foundations of your health like termites devouring the frame of a house. 

Thankfully, I’m also going to share with you a simple, all-natural, common sense shortcut that boosts your energy, magnifies brain function, and restores your immune system, without expensive supplements, or long workout routines, and it works even if you’re well over 50 and worry that you’ll never look or feel like you did in your 30s. 

DESIRE: The Whistleblower discovers or decides on something they want to change. They are driven by a desire to gain something positive or get rid of something negative.

RESISTANCE: The Whistleblower encounters internal or external resistance to the change they want. In trying to overcome it, they stumble upon a clue that their failure was orchestrated by a person or organization with a hidden agenda (The Conspirator). The Whistleblower becomes obsessed with solving this mystery.

PERSECUTION: While investigating the mystery, the Whistleblower suffers a substantial series of threats and attacks that seem to be coming from the Conspirator. As these attacks become more severe and frequent, the Whistleblower discovers evidence that proves his original suspicions to be valid. 

DISCOVERY: The Whistleblower discovers that the Conspirators have a secret they’ve been trying to hide from him and from those they’re conspiring to deceive, oppress, or persecute. The Whistleblower quickly realizes that this secret is either the Conspirator’s biggest weakness, or the source of their power.

SUCCESS: The Whistleblower achieves a substantial series of wins that can only be attributed to the secret discovered at Stage #4. They are now driven by a desire to share this secret with others. The Conspirators catch the Whistleblower preparing to reveal the secret, and the Whistleblower barely escapes the encounter with his life.

CONTRIBUTION: After a brief period of hiding, the Whistleblower decides to share what they’ve learned with others. This part of the story becomes the transition to the offer as their contribution to the world. A brief Epilogue reveals that while the Whistleblower sometimes questions whether going public was worth the risk, they ultimately believe that it was the right thing to do.

DESIRE: The Student discovers or decides on something they want to change. They are driven by a desire to gain something positive or get rid of something negative.

RESISTANCE: The Student encounters internal or external resistance to the change they want. They are either in denial about it or trying to overcome it by sheer persistence.

ENCOUNTER: The Student suffers a substantial setback or failure during which they meet the Teacher. The Student asks the Teacher to mentor them. After some reluctance and cynicism about the Student’s lack of readiness, the Teacher agrees. 

OVERCONFIDENCE: The Student achieves a substantial series of wins that can only be attributed to the Teacher’s guidance. However, the Student’s newfound success is tainted by pride and overconfidence for which the Teacher rebukes them.

TRAGEDY: The Student learns that the Teacher is ill and will soon pass away. The news breaks the Student’s pride and they demonstrate a maturity that gives the Teacher confidence to entrust the Student with a great secret and with the mission of passing it on to others.

CONTRIBUTION: After a period of mourning and self-doubt, the Student decides to accept the responsibility to pass on the Teacher’s wisdom. This part of the story becomes the transition to the offer as the Student’s contribution to the world. 

DESIRE: The Hero discovers or decides on something they want to change. They are driven by a desire to gain something positive or get rid of something negative.

RESISTANCE: The Hero encounters internal or external resistance to the change they want. They are either in denial about it or trying to overcome it by sheer persistence.

FAILURE: The Hero suffers a substantial setback or failure. They know they need to change their approach, but don’t know how and may have lost hope. 

INSIGHT: The Hero discovers something that renews their hope. This can include the discovery of a flaw in their approach, a new method, or a self-sabotaging belief, action, or habit.

SUCCESS: The Hero achieves a substantial series of wins that can only be attributed to the insight discovered at Stage #4. They are now driven by a desire to share this insight with others. 

CONTRIBUTION: The Hero decides to share what they’ve learned during their adventure. This part of the story becomes the transition to the offer as their contribution to the world. 

TEMPLATE:

(Secret [#]: [Name the Secret].)

([HOOK them with a tie down style question, an if ___ then ___ confirmation, OR a metaphorical or cause and effect correlation that confirms their experiences with the PROBLEM, and/or their desire to achieve it, and/or their suspicions about why they're struggling while others aren't]

(According to )[Statement using a credible data source], it's [not (MYTH), but SECRET) that (RESULT) OR (SECRET), not (MYTH) that (RESULT)]. This is a [“surprising discovery…” or “startling new fact…”], if you’re [statement about being frustrated, distracted, or deceived by the MYTH OR by lack of satisfactory results]. It [proves, reveals, exposes, explains] [statement about what's possible with the secret OR explaining/ justifying their past and/or current frustrations].

(According to )[Data source (above) which proves the secret and/or busts the myth] [impact of above promise that the AVATAR can presently relate with]. [Direct quote or example from data source here]. And that’s [“not all..” or “just the beginning]. [Data source again or second data source][statement from data source that teases a bigger and even hidden impact of the above promise] [even if/without/with no] [usual obstacle or hassle associated with achieving the promise]. [Optional statement from data source supporting this claim here].

[A metaphor, anecdote, fable or an analogy which gives a clear example of why or how the SECRET works]. [Include a supporting quote from one of their spiritual or political heroes of your AVATAR].

[Link to a recent as possible data source that proves the SECRET and/or busts the myth]. [Include an expert quote or passage from the source above that summarizes this final claim].

[Now, Just, Can you] [VAKOG] [suggestion about how applying or learning more about the SECRET will change your AVATARS life in a (SUPERSEVEN1×3) way]? [Close VESP/VAKOG1×7 questions, bold statements or a mind movie expanding on the lifestyle benefits of the PROMISE].

NOTE: The secret can be related to 1) A method, framework, or mechanism for getting the result, 2) An internal belief, 3) An external belief.

EXAMPLE:

Secret #1: People Don't Buy Big Ideas. They Buy Solutions to Problems

Ever wonder why best ideas have been ignored or even rejected by the market place? Ever wonder why people dumber than you are making more money than you selling what seem like ordinary products and services?

This is because people don't buy big ideas. They buy solutions to problems.

This is why people are ignoring your best ideas. It's because your ideas either don't solve a problem or they aren't being marketed as solutions to a problem.

Ever notice how some of the most successful solo entrepreneurs became mega millionaires selling an ordinary product? McDonald's did it selling hamburgers. William Wrigley Jr did it selling sticks of gum. Mary Kay Ash took an ordinary skin care cream and put her name on it. Bill Gates created the first version of Microsoft software by repurposing an ordinary software he got from someone else. Most successful businesses aren't built on big ideas. They're built on thoughtful and strategic service to human needs.

This is why nothing you've done so far has worked and you keep running out of money before you get any traction.

According to Investopedia, startups fail because they either run out of money, are in the wrong market, haven't done the market research, or because of ineffective marketing.

If you're frustrated that you keep running out of money before your business idea takes off, now you know why. And that’s just the beginning...

Research from Jim Collins, published in his book "How The Mighty  Fall," reveals that the most successful and fast growing companies of the 20th Century fell into bankruptcy or obscurity because they started overinnovating by dumping time, money, and marketing efforts into big ideas instead of staying committed to solving the problems they'd become famous for solving.

You've heard the saying that a great sales person can sell ice to an Eskimo. The hidden lesson in that old joke is that Eskimo's don't buy ice for one simple reason. They don't need it because it doesn't solve a relevant, critical, and urgent problem for them.

Today, nearly half of all new startups fail because there was no need in the market for what they were selling. This doesn't include startups that failed because their marketing failed to position the product as the solution to a problem.

The good news is that now you can use this Secret to make your next business venture can be widely successful, and it can happen faster and with far less money and frustration. Just imagine how it will feel to finally become one of those success stories that most people only get to read about. Now you can.

TEMPLATE:

(Mistake [#]: [Name the Mistake].)

([HOOK them with a tie down style question, an if ___ then ___ confirmation, OR a metaphorical or cause and effect correlation that confirms their experiences with the impact of this mistake, and/or their suspicions that there's either something they don't know yet or something they're doing wrong]?

[Statement confirming their suspicions are valid]. [Describe the mistake]. [Ever notice how, Think about the last time you, How many times have you] [paint a picture in their imagination of them making the mistake]. [Question drawing their attention to the outcome when they did]. This is because [statement linking the mistake to the impact].

This is why by [statement explaining/ justifying their past and/or current frustrations].

(According to )[Data source (above) which proves the above claims about the MISTAKE] [impact of that the AVATAR can presently relate with OR proof of a cause and effect link between the MISTAKE and the AVATAR'S present experience with the impact of the MISTAKE]. [Direct quote or example from data source here]. And that’s [“not all..” or “just the beginning]. [Data source again or second data source][statement from data source that teases a bigger and even hidden impact of the MISTAKE] even [ASSUMED EXCEPTION AND/OR ADVANTAGE]. [Optional statement from data source supporting this claim here].

[A metaphor, anecdote, fable or an analogy further explaining the MISTAKE ans its impact]. [Include a supporting quote from one of their spiritual or political heroes of your AVATAR].

[Link to a recent as possible data source that reinforces your claims about the MISTAKE and its impact]. [Include an expert quote or passage from the source above that summarizes this final claim].

The good news is [suggestion about how fixing or replacing the MISTAKE will change your AVATARS life in a (SUPERSEVEN1×3) way]. [Close VESP/VAKOG1×7 questions, bold statements or a mind movie expanding on the lifestyle benefits of this correction].

NOTE: The secret can be related to 1) A method, framework, or mechanism for getting the result, 2) An internal belief, 3) An external belief.

EXAMPLE:

Mistake #1: Believing in Big Ideas Instead of Solving Problems

Ever wonder why best ideas have been ignored or even rejected by the market place? Ever wonder why people dumber than you are making more money than you selling what seem like ordinary products and services?

This is because people don't buy big ideas. They buy solutions to problems.

This is why people are ignoring your best ideas. It's because your ideas either don't solve a problem or they aren't being marketed as solutions to a problem.

Ever notice how some of the most successful solo entrepreneurs became mega millionaires selling an ordinary product? McDonald's did it selling hamburgers. William Wrigley Jr did it selling sticks of gum. Mary Kay Ash took an ordinary skin care cream and put her name on it. Bill Gates created the first version of Microsoft software by repurposing an ordinary software he got from someone else. Most successful businesses aren't built on big ideas. They're built on thoughtful and strategic service to human needs.

This is why nothing you've done so far has worked and you keep running out of money before you get any traction.

According to Investopedia, startups fail because they either run out of money, are in the wrong market, haven't done the market research, or because of ineffective marketing.

If you're frustrated that you keep running out of money before your business idea takes off, now you know why. And that’s just the beginning...

Research from Jim Collins, published in his book "How The Mighty  Fall," reveals that the most successful and fast growing companies of the 20th Century fell into bankruptcy or obscurity because they started overinnovating by dumping time, money, and marketing efforts into big ideas instead of staying committed to solving the problems they'd become famous for solving.

You've heard the saying that a great sales person can sell ice to an Eskimo. The hidden lesson in that old joke is that Eskimo's don't buy ice for one simple reason. They don't need it because it doesn't solve a relevant, critical, and urgent problem for them.

Today, nearly half of all new startups fail because there was no need in the market for what they were selling. This doesn't include startups that failed because their marketing failed to position the product as the solution to a problem.

The good news is once you fix this mistake, your next business venture can be widely successful, and it can happen faster and with far less money and frustration. Just imagine how it will feel to finally become one of those success stories that most people only get to read about.

[“You’ve probably heard…” or “EXPERTS/AVATARS/IMPOSTERS will say that…” or “Many AVATARS believe…” or "(PROMOTER OF ALTERNATIVE) will tell you..."] that [ALTERNATIVE] can/will [ALTERNATIVE-PROMISE]. [“What you haven’t heard is…” or “what they won’t tell you is…” or “what most AVATARS don’t know is that…”] [ALTERNATIVE-FLAW] [PROOF-LEFT-BRAIN].

This is why [FLAW-IMPACT]. [PROOF-RIGHT-BRAIN*].

TAILS (Optional):

1. Do you [Question them about whether they want to pay the price of using the ALTERNATIVE despite it's flaw]?
2. So, if [Alternative, flaw, and impact summary], [finish with a question teasing the real way to achieve the PROMISE made by the ALTERNATIVE]?

NOTE: The “RIGHT BRAIN” proof can be a metaphor, anecdote or joke which proves how slow, convoluted, ineffective, dangerous, short-lived, unpleasant, or awkward (reverse of the SUPERSEVEN) the alternative is. You can also include a supporting quote from one of their spiritual or political heroes of your avatar or a funny one-liner.

EXAMPLE (WORKING):

You've probably seen ads that promise you hundreds of inbound coaching leads using a "Proven System." What they don't tell you is that their so-called "Proven System" isn't a proven system at all. It's either something they learned from an ebook or copied from someone else on the internet.

If you want evidence of this go to any freelance hiring site. You'll find at least a dozen cheap job postings from people hiring writers to create ebooks or marketing courses so they can position themselves as marketing experts.

These jobs pay meager rates of less than $10 an hour and are often done by people living in third world countries who work for $5 an hour. What are the odds that a writer working for $5 an hour has a Proven Marketing System that makes them hundreds of thousands or millions of dollars a year?

And would someone with a proven money making system need to hire a 3rd World writer to create it for them for only $5 an hour?

This is why you see ads everywhere now that promise to pack your coaching calendar using a Proven System while more coaches and consultants are being burned by self-proclaimed marketing experts and agencies who promise steak but deliver nothing but the sound of it sizzling.

You and I know the saying about wolves in sheep's clothing and how we'll know them by their fruits. Likewise you'll know a real expert not by whether they can use the words "Proven" and "System" in the same sentence.

You and I both know that real experts are only made by years of in the trenches experience, by their ability produce consistent results year after year and their ability to know the difference between truth and BS.

Do these Rubber Chicken Marketers really deserve another minute of your attention, let alone your trust, and your money?

TEMPLATE:

According to [Data source below which proves true path to promise][statement from data source about how the promise is possible for the avatar]. [Statement(s) or question(s) about how the promise is achieved]. [Direct quote from data source which supports statement and introduces the solution].

EXAMPLE #1 (Validation):

According to an article in Awesomeness Magazine, there are more than 5,000 business consultants in the US who earn seven figures a year. This can be frustrating for consultants who are still trying to break the $100,000 a year mark. What’s the difference between business consultants who earn mediocre income and business consultants earn a small fortune from their expertise?

This groundbreaking article could hold the answer. “After analyzing the marketing strategies of the top earners, the difference seems to lie HOW they communicate their value and authority” said “Expert Eddie,” author of the article The Seven Figure Breakthrough. “Top earners seem to have created their own unique category using a unique persuasion strategy based on the science of formal Axiology.”

EXAMPLE #2 (Excitement):

According to an article in Instant MoneyMaker, you could be closer to achieving entrepreneurial independence than you think. The article suggested that the one difference between business consultants who earn mediocre income and business consultants earn a small fortune is in how they communicate the value of their expertise to prospective clients. “

After analyzing the marketing strategies of the top earners, the difference seems to lie HOW they communicate their value and authority” said Expert Eddie, author of the article The Seven Figure Breakthrough. “Top earners seem to have created their own unique category using a revolutionary persuasion framework based on the science of formal Axiology.”

EXAMPLE #3 (Security):

According to the Nonexistent Numbers Bureau, 98% of entrepreneurs are just one recession away from going out of business. This is a startling statistic for business consultants who are still trying to break the $100,000 a year mark. What’s the difference between entrepreneurs who enjoy a steady stream of predictable, self-generating income and those whose business are held hostage by feast or famine income cycles?

This groundbreaking new study could reveal the answer. “After analyzing the marketing strategies of the top earners, the difference seems to lie in their long term marketing strategy,” said Expert Eddie, the studies top researcher. “Entrepreneurs who enjoy financial security have built an automated marketing system which brings them a steady stream of business.”

EXAMPLE #4 (Purpose):

According to a study from Nonexistent Numbers Inc, business consultants who earn several thousand to a million dollars a year are making a much bigger impact on the world. This can be frustrating for consultants who are still trying to break the $100,000 a year mark. What’s the difference between business consultants who earn mediocre income and business consultants earn a small fortune from their expertise?

This groundbreaking new study could hold the answer. “After analyzing the business habits of the top earners, the difference lies within HOW invest their time and money,” said Expert Eddie, author of the article The Seven Figure Breakthrough. “Top earners seem to different DNA when it comes to their decisions about how they use time and money. This is why they end up with the financial leverage to make such an impact on the world. Their secret? The long lost philosophy of The Seven Hermetic Principles…”

EXAMPLE:

A Business Growth Strategist doesn’t just focus helping you solve your most urgent problems. They challenge you to step outside your current circumstances, to look beyond your urgent needs and to realign your actions with your most important goals.

This is because a Business Growth Strategist challenges you to look beyond the symptoms of your problems, symptoms like low profit margins, lead poverty and lack of new sales and repeat business. All of these are the RESULT of not having a carefully planned marketing system in place.

If you aren’t already building such a system, it’s because you’re too focused on solving your urgent problems. A Business Growth Strategist brings an outside perspective and helps you focus on building a marketing system which will eventually solve ALL of these problems.

EXAMPLE:

Most importantly, because a Business Growth Strategist helps you build a system for success, you can be 100% certain that you’ll be able to create predictable and sustainable results, even years after you’ve ended your coaching arrangement.

Most importantly, because a Business Growth Strategist helps you build a system for success, you can be 100% certain that all the symptoms like lead poverty, low cash flow and feast or famine income cycles will be a distant memory, even after you’ve finishing your coaching relationship.

EXAMPLE #1 (Validation):

Having a business coach in your corner is like having a personal trainer who challenges you to keep pushing when you think you’ve got nothing left. Ever wanted to know just how much hidden potential you’ve really got inside you? Now you can find out.”

EXAMPLE #2 (Excitement):

Having a business coach is like having a personal “opportunity scout,” constantly looking out for new opportunities and ideas for you to grow your business and expand your influence. Ever wondered what kinds of opportunities you were missing because you had to focus on running your business? Now you can get these opportunities on your radar before they disappear.”

EXAMPLE #3 (Security):

Having a business coach is like having a someone watch over you as you walk through a minefield. If an outside perspective keeps you from making even ONE poor business decision a month, how much time, energy and money could you save over the next year?”

EXAMPLE #4 (Purpose):

Having a business coach is like having a pair of binoculars which help you get a clearer picture of where your current actions will take you one, five, ten years from now. How much more likely are you to achieve your life’s purpose if you have someone who is determined to make sure you stay focused on what REALLY matters?”

EXAMPLE (Experts):

Expert Eddie has used Business Coaches since the start of his career, to help him stay focused on his long term goal. He did this even before we could “afford it.” if this is how he got where he is today, where could a business coach take YOU over the next 18 months?

EXAMPLE (Avatar Peers):

More than 3,000 of America’s wealthiest entrepreneurs use Business Coaches. This is how they perform at their peak potential and develop new skills in a fraction of the time it would take the average entrepreneur to do so. Do they use Business Coaches because they can “afford” to….or are they where they are BECAUSE they use coaches?

EXAMPLE #1:

Working with a Business Growth Strategist is more important today than it’s ever been. The rise of the information age has created dozens of opportunities for small business owners like yourself to overthrow the big competitors using content marketing, social media and virtual marketing technologies. The problem is that things are changing so fast, most business owners don’t have the time and energy to evolve, let alone leverage these new opportunities. A Business Growth Strategist’s primary job is to keep you one step ahead of your competitor’s. They’ll help you sort out the opportunities from the distractions and focus ALL your resources on what really works.

EXAMPLE #2:

Working with a Business Growth Strategist is more important today than it’s ever been. You’re doing business in the most aggressively competitive marketplace in history. Everywhere you turn, there’s another competitor or alternative solution ready to scoop up the customers you’ve worked so hard to get your message in front of. A Business Growth Strategist can help you get an unfair advantage by creating a system that will set YOUR brand in a category of its own

Most importantly, because a Business Growth Strategist helps you build a system for success, you can be 100% certain that all the symptoms like lead poverty, low cash flow and feast or famine income cycles will be a distant memory, even after you’ve finishing your coaching relationship.

EXAMPLE #1:

When you work with a Business Growth Strategist, the first thing they’ll do is get a clear picture of what your most important goals are for your business. Next, they’ll break that goal down into monthly milestones, weekly milestones and finally, into specific action steps and habits. This way, you’ll be 100% confident that the actions you’re taking today will take you exactly where you want to go tomorrow.

EXAMPLE #2:

When you work with a Business Growth Strategist, the first thing they’ll do is get a clear picture of what your most important goals are for your business. This way, you’ll BOTH have a clear set of standards to aid in creating a plan for what you need to do do every day and every moment in order to reach your long term goal. This means, no more sacrificing what’s important for the sake of what’s urgent.

EXAMPLE:

The danger of hiring a Business Growth Strategist is that they won’t “get” your vision or your values. Even Business Coaches with decades of experience can miss your vision, especially if they assume you fit the pattern of their past clients. While it might be easy to spot this conflict early on, you could also end up working with someone who challenges you to charge full blast in the wrong direction.

EXAMPLE:

Value Mechanics is the ONLY selling system which uses a blend of math and psychology to create a customized business growth solution that fits the needs of your business AND your target market.

This is because Value Mechanics is the first selling system ever to be based on a real brand of science called ‘Axiology,’ and on the basic principles of human needs psychology. This means, instead of creating a marketing system based on theories or ideas, we build one using sound scientific fundamentals which have been around for decades.

No other business growth solution in the world is based on verifiable science, and we’ll gladly challenge ANY of them to prove us wrong.

EXAMPLE #1 (Validation):

The Value Mechanics Selling system isn’t a complicated mess of swipe files, awkward templates and “hypnotic copywriting secrets” that will make you sound like a creepy stalker when you writer promotional messages. It doesn’t require you to sit behind the keyboard like a lab monkey practicing copywriting techniques when you could be writing ads and making money. Value Mechanics was designed to put you on the quickest and most direct route to writing finely polished sales copy WITHOUT having to rely on swipe files. Even if you’ve sworn to yourself that you’d never set yourself up for that kind of failure and humiliation again. As soon as you see with your own eyes how quickly you can whip up professional and polished sales copy, you’ll forget the countless, frustrating hours you used to spend struggling to write your own advertisements.

EXAMPLE #2 (Excitement):

The Value Mechanics Selling system isn’t a boring collection of swipe files, 3 hour “expert” interviews and long pages of vague selling theories that will take years to read through and which are nearly impossible integrate into your own copywriting. It doesn’t require you to sit behind the keyboard like a lab monkey practicing copywriting techniques when you could be writing ads and making money. Value Mechanics was designed to put you on the quickest and most direct route to writing finely polished sales copy WITHOUT having to rely on swipe files. Even if you’ve sworn to yourself that you’d never put yourself through such an ordeal again. The moment you see with your own eyes how easily you can add dozens of daily subscribers to your email list and convert them into paying customers, you’ll completely forget all the times you’ve been let down by work from home business courses.

EXAMPLE #3 (Security):

The Value Mechanics Selling system isn’t an overpriced mess of swipe files, awkward templates and “hypnotic copywriting secrets” that will make you feel like you threw away the money you could have used to build a more secure business. It doesn’t require you to sit behind the keyboard like a lab monkey practicing copywriting techniques, only to worry every time you invest your money into publishing those ads. Value Mechanics was designed to put you on the most certain and direct route to writing finely polished sales copy WITHOUT having to rely on swipe files. Even if you’ve sworn to yourself that you’d never dump your precious time or money into another copywriting course. As soon as you see with your own eyes how consistently you can whip up professional and polished sales copy, you’ll forget the countless, frustrating hours you used to spend worrying about whether your ads would get a response.

EXAMPLE #4 (Purpose):

The Value Mechanics Selling system isn’t an impractical collection of swipe files, expert interviews and long pages of vague selling theories which have no purposeful application for promoting your unique business. It doesn’t require you to sit behind the keyboard like a lab monkey practicing copywriting techniques when you could be growing your business and expanding your vision. Value Mechanics was designed to put you on the quickest and most direct route to writing finely polished sales copy WITHOUT having to rely on swipe files. Even if you’ve sworn to yourself that you’d never waste your time with another copywriting course. The moment you see with your own eyes how clearly and confidently you can communicate your message and your vision to your readers, you’ll completely forget all the time and money you’ve burnt up on less superior copywriting courses.

EXAMPLE #1 (Validation):

Other copywriting software programs give you half-written, awkward sounding sales letter that make you sound like a bumbling clod instead of a polished professional, leaving you feeling like a fool for being duped into buying the software in the first place. With the Value Mechanics Selling System’s scientific and intuitive software and copywriting templates, you can create sales messages that make you sound like a confident and well-educated writer, even if you have no selling experience and even if you’re self-conscious about your writing skills. This means no more feeling embarrassed about what people are reading in your sales message. This means no more feeling like you’re wasting your time and money on copywriting programs that leave you feeling like something is wrong with you because your copy doesn’t look like the examples you saw in the ad for the product.

EXAMPLE #2 (Focused):

Other copywriting software programs give you half-written, awkward sounding sales letter that you have to spend so long editing, you’re left wondering whether you should have just written it without the software and saved yourself the headache. With the Value Mechanics Selling System’s scientific and intuitive software and copywriting templates, you can create sales messages that have a powerful influence your reader’s subconscious mind, even if you have no selling experience and even if you’re never written a good sales message in your life. This means no more writer’s block, no more hunting the internet for sales letters to swipe and no more long hours at the keyboard. No more burning the midnight oil while your spouse snores away in bed or spending sunny Saturday afternoons hunched over your keyboard writing copy.

EXAMPLE #3 (Security):

Other copywriting software programs give you half-written, awkward sounding sales letter that force you to burn up so much of your time writing mediocre copy, you’re left worrying whether the ROI will be worth even a fraction of the time you spent writing . With the Value Mechanics Selling System’s scientific and intuitive software and copywriting templates, you can create sales messages that have a powerful influence your reader’s subconscious mind, even if you have no selling experience and even if you’re never written a good sales message in your life. This means no more anxiety when you spend your marketing dollars, no burning up money hiring copywriters and no more uncertainty about whether your pages will convert.

EXAMPLE #4 (Purpose):

Other copywriting software programs give you half-written, awkward sounding sales letter that force you to burn up so much of your time writing mediocre copy, you’re left feeling like you don’t have enough time to focus on what’s really important. With the Value Mechanics Selling System’s scientific and intuitive software and copywriting templates, you can create sales messages that persuade more people to buy your products and services, even if you have no selling experience and even if you’re never written a good sales message in your life. This means no more false starts, no more time wasted writing copy when you should be running your business. No more watching opportunity slip away from you because you’re burning up too much energy on creating promotional messages.

Using the Value Mechanics Selling System to reposition your brand will help you get paid the fees you’re really worth. It will save you from having to burn up your time serving customers who don’t fully appreciate the value you’re offering. It can eliminate the anxiety of having to constantly scramble for new business. Most important, it can give you the financial leverage to pursue your ultimate purpose in life and to create a meaningful legacy.

EXAMPLE #1:

This is because the Value Mechanics Selling System is designed to change your prospect’s perception of your product or service. It helps you communicate all the hidden benefits of doing business with you, benefits which your prospects can’t get from working with the competition. It makes you an authority in your niche and empowers you to attract the types of clients you’d most like to work with.

EXAMPLE #2:

This is because the Value Mechanics Selling System isn’t just designed to get immediate results, it’s designed to help you create lasting value by building a ‘marketing infrastructure’ that will bring you a predictable flow of quality leads, new sales and repeat business.

EXAMPLE:

Most importantly, because Value Mechanics is designed to help you build a marketing ecosystem using sound scientific principles, you can be certain that this infrastructure will be in there to produce results for you long after you’ve stopped working with us.

EXAMPLE #1 (Validation):

The Value Mechanics Selling System gives you the 30,000 foot view on your marketing. It’s like when you’re in an airplane, the mountains and obstacles on the ground seem small in comparison to your view of the bigger landscape. This keeps the urgent challenges of the moment from controlling your decisions and puts YOU back in charge.

EXAMPLE #2 (Excitement):

Using the Value Mechanics Selling System is like going fishing and putting on a pair of glasses that allows you to see all the way to the bottom of the ocean. You clearly see every opportunity and you know exactly where to invest your time, energy and money. So you get first shot at new opportunities while your competitors are scrambling after the next trend or fad.”

EXAMPLE #3 (Security):

Using the Value Mechanics Selling System is like having real time surveillance equipment which shows you EVERYTHING going on in your business. You can quickly drill down to ANY area of your marketing plan, find the weak links in the chain and quickly correct them .

EXAMPLE #4 (Purpose):

The Value Mechanics Selling System gives you a road map for reaching your long term destination and achieving your biggest and most important business goals. It keeps you from being led down dead end roads by marketing trends because you’ve built system that’s specifically designed to support your long term vision.

EXAMPLE (Experts):

Dan Kennedy said this about the Value Mechanics Selling System, “Seth Czerepak has accomplished a herculean purpose with this system. He has taken some of the most sophisticated aspects of writing to sell, persuade and influence, and made them pragmatically useful, nearly to the point of fill-in-the-blank systemization.’ If one of the world’s leading authorities on direct marketing endorsed this system, imagine what it could do for you.”

EXAMPLE (Avatar Peers):

Over the past 17 years, I’ve applied these principles to help more than 1,300 small business owners and solo entrepreneurs achieve greater and more predictable cash flow. Imagine what could happen if you had this kind of time-tested system to work in your business.

EXAMPLE #1:

Building your own ROI Ecosystem is more important today than it’s ever been. The rise of automated, online marketing technology has created dozens of opportunities for small business owners like yourself to build marketing systems which rival those of the big competitors, without the extra overhead. A Value Mechanics Practitioner’s primary job is to help you use this technology to build a marketing machine that will help you attract, convert and retain customers faster and more effortlessly than any of your competitors.

EXAMPLE #2:

Building your own ROI Ecosystem is more important today than it’s ever been. You’re doing business in the most aggressively competitive marketplace in history. Everywhere you turn, there’s another competitor or alternative solution ready to scoop up the customers you’ve worked so hard to get your message in front of. Comparison shopping is at an all time high and thousands of small business owners like yourself are feeling the pressure to measure up to the competition. Value Mechanics is the first and only marketing system which is designed to help you create a promotional strategy and brand identity that puts YOUR brand in a category of its own.

EXAMPLE #1:

When you work with a Value Mechanics Practitioner, the first thing they’ll do is get a clear picture of who your IDEAL prospect is, which communication channels they trust most. This way, they can help you create a marketing system that communicate the value of your product or service using the message and the media which will make the biggest impact on your target market.

EXAMPLE #2:

When you work with a Value Mechanics Practitioner , the first thing they’ll do is get a clear picture of which of your marketing strategies are creating results and which aren’t. This way, you can redirect your time, energy and money into the strategies which will produce the biggest and most predictable returns.

NOTE: Who it's for and who it's not for. Beginners and/or Advanced. Use this section to start knocking down objections (Catch, Doubt, Time commitment, money, etc.). Use words like “but wait,” or “but before” and list the qualifications for purchase. Or, if the offer is limited time, make that a qualification and tell them “YOUR copy of (product, bonuses etc) will be gone forever” or “passed on to someone else. The “if, then” anchor is a good transition out of this stage and into the call to action.

EXAMPLE:

STOP: Before You Get Started…

There’s a reason you’re about to invest 5 times as much into his training as you would into most other systems.

It’s because this one works.

I know this because I’ve used it in thousands of other businesses. I’ve seen ordinary businesses go from being money pits, to being well-oiled, passive income machines.

But I’ll be honest, my system isn’t not for everyone. It’s for people who are entrepreneurs at heart, and just need to build a business which is worthy of the vision picture in their mind.

But I’m 100% convinced that you’re either born as an entrepreneur or you’re not. For every wildly successful entrepreneur, there are about 100 who will never earn more any more money than they’re already making.

What’s the difference?

It’s simple. Ordinary people want to get to own a business so they won’t have to work. True entrepreneurs love to work. They simply want to the work they love most. They want a business which gives them the freedom to use their talents to make life better and to make a lasting impact on the world.

If your heart is leaping in your chest at the thought of this, you’re ready to get started. And with this system, you’ll never have to waste your time trying to get there by trial and error.

TEMPLATE #1 (We paid time, money and sweat, you take no risk):

"The Value Mechanics Selling System" is the results of over (value through time spent>)15 years of experience working one on one with multi-millionaire and billionaire entrepreneurs. (value through money invested>)I’ve invested over $80,000.00 in training tools, and spent (value through work invested>)countless hours of trial and error to perfect this one-of-a-kind system that I’m about to (no risk to buyer>)present to you at absolutely no risk.”

TEMPLATE #2 (List subitems of primary deliverable):

“The Value Mechanics Selling System" is the most comprehensive training course on the market for becoming a master entrepreneur. You’ll get (expanded description of package>)over 300 training videos, a monthly newsletter, three dynamic software programs for managing your projects, your finances and your marketing campaigns PLUS access to our member’s only forum.”

TEMPLATE #3 (Customized):

"The Value Mechanics Selling System" is the world’s first and ONLY cloud based, intuitive business management system made (customized for specific avatar>)specifically for internet marketers who want to create and market their own high quality information products and build an online business they can walk away from without losing money.”

TEMPLATE #4 (Social Proof):

Introducing "The Value Mechanics Selling System," the negotiation course used by more than one hundred thousand sales people across the world. It’s been translated into 10 different languages and sold in over 50 different countries.

TEMPLATE #5 (Unique):

"The Value Mechanics Productivity System" is the (one-of-a-kind positioning>)only personal growth product which teaches a science based strategy for mastering the core skills of an entrepreneur. This System was specifically designed by an entrepreneur and an expert in human behavior and peak performance.

TEMPLATE:

First, You’ll get [MAIN DELIVERABLE]. This is a [DESCRIPTION AND BENEFIT AND PRICE OF DEVELOPMENT]. This is a total value of [VALUE].

Next, you’ll get [TIME OBJECTION #1 BONUS]. This is a [DESCRIPTION OF HOW IT OVERCOMES TIME OBJECTION].

So, you'll be getting [ITEMS RECAP WITH VALUE], for a total value of [RUNNING TOTAL] when you [ACTION] today.

PLUS/But that’s not all…

You’ll also get [CONFIDENCE OBJECTION #1 BONUS]. This is a [DESCRIPTION OF HOW IT OVERCOMES CONFIDENCE OBJECTION].

So, you'll be getting [ITEMS RECAP WITH VALUE], for a total value of [RUNNING TOTAL] when you [ACTION] today.

You’ll also get [MONEY OBJECTION #1 BONUS]. This is a [DESCRIPTION OF HOW IT OVERCOMES MONEY OBJECTION].

So, you'll be getting [ITEMS RECAP WITH VALUE], for a total value of [RUNNING TOTAL] when you [ACTION] today.

Finally, you'll get [SOCIAL OBJECTION #1 BONUS]. This is a [DESCRIPTION OF HOW IT OVERCOMES SOCIAL OBJECTION].

So, you'll be getting [ITEMS RECAP WITH VALUE].

EXAMPLE:

First, You’ll get The Complete Value Mechanics Content Marketing Mastery Course. This is a to start to finish guide for going from absolute beginner in content marketing, to a seasoned expert who can easily create, manage, and troubleshoot five and six figure content marketing projects. This course and all its training materials are a total value of $10,000.

Next, you’ll get The Value Mechanics Content Planner. This is a user-friendly system I've specifically created for easily planning, managing, and optimizing small and large content marketing projects. This Planner will save you literally hundreds of hours in trying to find and customize a your own solution. I invested more than tens years into creating this, and it would easily sell as a stand alone product for $250.

So, you'll be getting The Complete Value Mechanics Content Marketing Mastery Course, valued at $10,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Content Planner, valued at $250 for a total value of $10,250 when you sign up today.

Next, you'll get access to my personal vault of training videos on the deep, science-based psychological ingredients of copywriting. This is a easily the most comprehensive set of training materials in the world for turning any reasonably smart person into a copywriting wizard. This course is a total value of $5,000.

So, you'll be getting The Complete Value Mechanics Content Marketing Mastery Course, valued at $10,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Content Planner, valued at $250, PLUS my personal Copywriting Mastery Vault, valued at $5,000 for a total value of $15,250 when you sign up today.

Next, you'll get by step-by-step Value Mechanics Prospecting System. This is the same client-finding system that myself and my students personally used to find and to close five figure client projects, without spending a single dollar on ads, and with less than one hour of work every day. This system previously sold for $250.

So, you'll be getting The Complete Value Mechanics Content Marketing Mastery Course, valued at $10,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Content Planner, valued at $250, PLUS my personal Copywriting Mastery Vault, valued at $5,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Prospecting System, valued at $250 for a total value of $15,500 when you sign up today.

Finally, you'll get my Value Mechanics Negotiation Course which is a step-by-step system for becoming the kind of negotiator who commands trust and respect, inspires loyalty and long-term commitment from clients, from people who work from you, AND from people in your personal life who would otherwise sabotage your ability to launch, run, and grow a successful business. This system previously sold for $500 on my website.

So, you'll be getting The Complete Value Mechanics Content Marketing Mastery Course, valued at $10,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Content Planner, valued at $250, PLUS my personal Copywriting Mastery Vault, valued at $5,000, PLUS The Value Mechanics Prospecting System, valued at $250, PLUS The Value Mechanics Negotiation Course, valued at $500 for a total value of $16,000 when you sign up today.

TEMPLATE #1 (Cost of Development):

"The Value Mechanics Copywriting System” has taken me over 15 years to develop, test, refine and perfect. Today, it’s all yours for a one time investment of only $899.

TEMPLATE #2 (Cost of Alternatives):

Learning these copywriting skills on your own could cost you $5,000, $10,000, even up to $20,000…and that’s just to get your hands on a big mess of swipe files and techniques that you’d have to search through and organize every time you write a new sales letter.

I'll make your life easy and give you 60 days of risk free access to “The Ninjaprenuer” for a simple payment of only $29 a month. This means that for a measly .99 a day, you can have instant access to a toolbox of swipe and deploy copywriting techniques and put a stop to low conversions and writing anxiety starting today.

TEMPLATE #3 (Save by Spending):

The great news is that instead of paying ten, twenty, thirty thousand dollars or burning up 5, 10 or 15 years trying to grow an autonomous, six-figure income stream on your own, you can now try “The Copywriting Cure” RISK FREE for a full 60 days for a single installment of just $899!

TEMPLATE #4 (Risk Removal):

“Guitar God Mastery Course” could save you $3,000, $5,000 or $10,000 on private guitar lessons over the next 5 years. And today, you can get it rushed to your door for one simple investment of just $599. Remember, your investment is backed up by a full 90 day money back guarantee. If at any time during the next 90 days, you’re not 100% convinced that “Guitar God Mastery Course,” is the fastest way to master the guitar, just mail the course back to us for a full refund.

TEMPLATE #5 (Appeal to Status):

It takes an intelligent person to appreciate the value of a good business management system, so we realize that not everyone will be willing to say yes to this offer. But if you want to solve your project collaboration problems in the next 7 days, you can get started today for just $29 a month. That’s a very small fraction of what you’d invest to build this system yourself, which could cost up to $100,000 So if you’d rather invest $29 a month to keep from paying $100,000 for a customized solution…”

TEMPLATE #6 (Money for Sale):

The last 10 customers to order “Marketing Mastery” have increased their monthly income by at least $2,500 and up to $5,000 a month. For three simple payments of just $399, you can get started with “Marketing Mastery” today, and by the time your final payment is due, “Marketing Mastery” could easily pay for itself ten times over.

TEMPLATE #7 (I Dare You):

Hundreds of our clients have already doubled, tripled and quadrupled their income using “Marketing Magician.” Now, you can join them for one, simple investment of only $500. Do you have what it takes to turn $500 into $10,000, $20,000 or $100,000 as these other clients have?

TEMPLATE #8 (Saving Money):

Other home security systems could cost you $500, $600, up to $750 plus cost of installation and monthly monitoring. However, “Super Security” can be yours today with no installation charges, no monthly monitoring charges and no need for an installer to come out to your house. Just a one-time installment of $300 and your home security problems are solved for GOOD.

TEMPLATE #9 (Cost Context):

And the best part is, “The Ninjapreneur” can be rushed to your door for a simple yearly subscription fee of just $99. That’s less than $10 a month to have loads of fresh copywriting headline, templates, industry specific research and in depth articles and interviews with self-made entrepreneurs delivered directly to your front door step every month for a full year.

TEMPLATE #10 (What's ___ Worth?):

What would it be worth to lose 20, 30 or 50 lbs & have your high school figure back? $1,000? $2,000? $5,000? That’s NOT what you’ll pay today. Instead, you’ll get 21 Shortcuts to Persuasion, the 6 Cashflow Copywriting Superpowers workbook, the complete Cashflow Swipe file, 21 over the shoulder training videos and all three bonuses for a one time investment of just $899.

EXAMPLE #1 (Guarantee + Sweetener):

Your purchase of "Acne Hack," is also secured by a 100%, no questions asked money back guarantee. If at any time over the next 60 days you believe "Acne Hack" isn’t the solution to solving your skin problems, just send it back for a full refund.

Plus, order in the next 5 minutes and you’ll get six months supply of our all-natural organic soap - normally sold for $99, yours free when you order today.

EXAMPLE #2 (Sweetener + Guarantee):

Plus, if you order in the next 20 minutes, you'll get six months supply of our all-natural organic soap. Finally, since we want you to be 100% confident in your decision to try "Copywriting Magic," I'm sealing this deal with a 100% money back guarantee.

If at ANY time in the next 30 days, you believe "Copywriting Magic" isn’t for you, simply send it back for a FULL refund. You can keep the bonuses!

OPTION #1 (Take Away):

Warning: Only 100 copies of The Value Mechanics Selling System will be sold. If your order is received late, your payment will be automatically rejected.

OPTION #2 (FOMO):

IMPORTANT: The 70% discount is only available to the first 100 customers to order. Act before leaving this site or your copy of The Value Mechanics Mastermind System will be passed to the next person in line.

OPTION #3 (Pending Buyout):

But you want grab this risk free offer right now because 2 major financial institutions already have their eye on this system and any day now I might be forced to take this offer down. If you don’t act now, you might have to regret it when you come back to find this page gone forever.

EXAMPLE:

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EXAMPLE:

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EXAMPLE:

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We’re so confident that you’ll be thrilled with “Marketing Badass” that we’re ready to (guarantee>)give you ALL your money back (guarantee premium>)PLUS a $50 gift card if you aren’t making more money in just 90 days.

So why wait? In just 90 days, you could be (benefit>)making more money and working LESS hours, so (action>)fill in and mail the order form now!

EXAMPLE:

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EXAMPLE:

Just (action>)fill in the form on this page RIGHT NOW to (delivery>)start your free 30 day trial on the next page! If at (guarantee>)ANY time within the next 30 days you’re dissatisfied in ANY way, simply cancel your second month and your credit card will NEVER be charged! (action>)Fill in the order form RIGHT NOW and get ready to (benefit>)discover the marketing secrets of six figure entrepreneurs!

EXAMPLE:

Remember, (fomo urgency>)this offer expires when you leave this page OR when the final slot is taken! (action>)Click the JOIN NOW button RIGHT NOW to (benefit>)reserve your exclusive spot in our Mastermind Program and make this your most PROFITABLE year in business! (delivery>)On the next page, you'll get access to your funnel building templates and book your onboarding call. Remember that your investment is (guarantee>)backed by 5x your ROI guarantee. (action>)Click the JOIN NOW button, before your slot in the Mastermind Program goes to someone else. 

EXAMPLE:

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EXAMPLE:

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#1 POINT OF NO RETURN:

You’ve come this far, why walk up to the door of opportunity and walk away without even knocking?

#2 REGRET:

This offer expires in 48 hours, if you don’t act now, you’ll have to regret it when you come back to find it gone forever.

#3 RESPONSIBILITY:

You read this offer because you wanted to win more clients and get paid what you’re really worth, now it’s time do something about it!

#4 JEALOUSY:

Only 50 people will get this amazing 70% discount. If you don’t act now, YOUR $49 copy of ‘Cashflow Copywriter’ will go to someone else.

#5 GAIN/LOSE:

Your $49 investment is secured by a full 60 day money back guarantee! You’ve got nothing to lose and unlimited financial freedom to gain.

#6 NOTHING TO LOSE:

Your $499 investment is secured by a full 60 day money back guarantee! You’ve got absolutely NOTHING to lose, except your thankless day job!

#7 EGO JAB:

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#8 FOREACAST (Negative):

If you’re okay with trudging on at the same meager income level for the next five or ten years, or for the rest of your life, go ahead and leave this page. But you’re likely to regret it when you find this offer gone forever.

#9 FOREACAST (Positive):

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#10 REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY:

If you’ve read this entire message and you’re still not ready to act, you probably never will. Too bad, by this time next month you’ll realize that you could have already solved all your debt problems.